Consider the classic sayings "love is blind" and "patience is a virtue." A metaphor for a bedroom could be, " His bedroom is like a sauna since the air conditioner broke." There are books all over the place. When I walk into my room I feel alone and relaxed. My most special object in my room is my tiger picture above my bed. I like how you have used lots of descriptive words. My room feels very charismatic and lively, as though a lot is happening in a single space. It is placed next to my bed and upon it is a long, skinny lamp with pink polka dots on it. The bright stuff in my room are mainly the walls, desk and drawers, my room gets a lot brighter when I open the curtains because my windows are a basically a wall itself, but with a window that big everything ends up being brighter during the day and night in the summer which is a problem (even with the curtains pulled). I also have a pin board where I can pin on some memories, art and events to come. A metaphor is a literary device in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action in a way that is not possible in a literal sense. There are so many aspects of my bed I love but my favorite one would have to how comfortable it is. Around the corner from my desk there is a window bay couch that is navy blue, across from the couch there is my Aqua chair covered in rugs and pillows. The odours of the room could be smelt from the kitchen. The blankets on my bed are very colourful there is a bright red, white and grey striped blanket, a soft pink one and a plain white one. You described your bedroom very well, but I feel your punctuation let you down a bit. You might walk through all the different scenes of people playing and say, wow, my home has become a playground today!. Next to them I have tall, white draws bulging with clothes. it has a touch of my personality, and stays clean most of the time. With blue sheets on it and a big pink and blue duvet. My bedroom is a very new addition to the world, like how its layout is not even final and having barely any furniture. Good description of your room Peta. I'm impressed with your vocabulary and spelling. On my desk there lies a golden skull candle. Cleanliness, my room is not what you call clean my clothes from school lying on my bed jerseys not been hung up because I'm to lazy, my bed all messed up because I never make it, but some things aren't all bad like the way I have set up stuff that makes it look really cool and neat. This situation becomes extra annoying in the afternoon, where the sun is falling down to the horizon, which makes is way too bright when Im sitting at my desk and doing homework. She could have added the fact that we live in a Lockwood home which is why the walls are made of wooden planks. Your description was enjoyable to read. My dresser is made of dark brown wood, with some clothes that hang out the drawers. But the worst thing about having a messy room is the feeling that you have of dreading about actually cleaning it. You had very descriptive vocabulary and there was a lot of adjectives and that made it very interesting. Let me describe the 4 features of my bedroom to you. Well described - good use of descriptive words. You're spelling was really great, I don't think I found a single error. I suck creamy cock. I think my bedroom is perfect my way because of the colors, layout and the design. I have a gray shelving unit and an old looking bed side table. Sheep are dotted around a field of copious green, munching greedily away. I like it this way because it's bright and colourful. All I can see is clothes all over my floor dirty plates on my bed side table. I would give you a 3. Beside my bed is a little white bedside table housing a wide variety of items mainly things I couldnt be bothered to put away. The colours in your room must be very bright with the sun on it and I can visualise your room. It holds over 40 books as well as countless keepsakes, wires and old toys. I have a chair that is very sturdy but comfortable and a table which is birch with white markings and has a curve on the end. Having the perfect bedroom isnt that hard as long as you make it yours. The best part about having a themed bedroom is that it makes me more relaxed when I come home from a long day at school. I try make my room a beach theme because I love going to the beach. There is a similar popular simile that means the same thing: my home looks like a bomb hit it. On one of the 4 walls (the feature wall) is a dark red color but even though it is my favourite color I didn't choose it I would have rathered it be a little bit lighter. So, a swamp is a perfect place for them to live. Then theres my laundry basket that is white with lots of clothes in it. Now to the TV, it's too big! There is just the right amount of furniture in my room and it isnt too full or empty. At the bottom of the bed I have a bright red cover I keep it there just in case there's a cold night so if there is I can pull it over my bed for more warmth. I pull it out when friends come to stay. 4 out of 5. When you look around my room you can see a whole bunch of different things, if you climb above all the dirty clothes, theres all of my furniture, my radiator and a whole load of colours. Again, were applying the feelings of being at home (relaxation and comfort) to some other situation and achieving this by making a comparative metaphor. Good job! My room was and old garage and now it is a room that has an olden day look, but still feels like a modern room. On the far side of my room is an old desk that needs getting rid of because all it does is collect dust. You used capital letters in the right places and a few different types of punctuation. At first, I thought you were describing the ocean! This simile is used to describe the letters Roland and Maud find at Seal Court, in Christabel's 2. I am lucky as the sunlight peeks over the fence and smothers my walls with a bright, warm glow. It's the one spot in the house where it's completely designed by me. A medium size room down the end of a long hallway. Clothes everywhere all over the floor and I have no way of knowing if they are clean or dirtyI certainly don't want to smell them! Sharp fallen off deer antlers just around the corner on top of the moveable closet a prize off snooping around while hunting. My colors, I like the choice of colors that are in my bedroom. The carpet is basking in the rays of the afternoon sun. My blinds are a creamy, white colour that go all the way to the floor. Moving on from the layout of my bedroom to the layout of my walls. there is a tree outside my bedroom window. I would really like to move things around,like move my desk away from my bed (so I don't always knock my head on the corner), and move everything against the wall so I can do wacky things with mo.re space in the centre of my room, although I would have to actually clean it once in awhile. So my cabinet in the corner it's a old wooden cabinet which just holds all my clothes. State of my Bedroom.The state of my bedroom is well atrocious there's a mountain there and a another one over there. My bedroom is the best place in the house because of the way that it gets the warmth of the sun, the way that it has my favorite colour as a feature wall and because everyone in my family is jealous of it. When did organ music become associated with baseball? must suck cock. One window is high on the wall with a rectangular shape the other window is more centered on the wall and is a square. Now another thing about my room is that it is never clean well unless mum cleans it but there's always something on the ground like a lunch box or cloths mostly cloths. But thankfully, I dont have to suffer these flaws much longer, because in the holidays, Ill be moving rooms and Ill have the smallest but sunniest room in the house. There isnt tonnes of furniture in my bedroom but I make it work with the room I have, I had the idea of a cabin bed so that i can fit some stuff under it rather than having it crammed up somewhere else. Its unmade and a bit rumpled, with a green and blue botanical duvet cover on it. You could make some ideas paragraphs a bit longer. Your spelling needs some tweaking but overall I think you've done really well :). On the wall is a black outlined photo frame with photos of me and my family and our holiday to Australia. I enjoyed the comparison you made between the mess and cleanliness. It has quite a bit of mess on top of the cabinet and next to the cabinet is white and black draws which holds my books and other things and above the drawers is a colorful kite. If were tired, then R.I.P floor, your burial is in progress. I also have 2 paintings on the wall, I used to have 3 but my nephew ripped one off so it is lying in my stuffed toy pit now. There is normally a lot of clothes spewing out of the the draws and onto the floor, it sortof looks like a waterfall if you are really imagine it, I find it frustrating when my Mum cleans it up because it is just going to get messy again. The view outside my window is not the best. My turquoise blanket has a delicate touch, so fluffy you want to take it everywhere. So, you can use this metaphor! I spotted a few spelling and punctuation mistakes. The furniture in my room is quite tight. I think my bedroom is amazing but still has a bit of work to be done on it for it to be a masterpiece! The colouring is a dark grey frame with translucent drawers. So I think that I don't really have a style because it just a bit of everything some old stuff and some new stuff. The sun shines through my room during the day and makes my room look light. I have a single bed which it is made from wood as its frame, it has a black with grey duvet, and if you look above it, theres an adorable tiger painting. I don't know how they got there. 036-536 88 75. The carpet packs a warm feel to the room as it completes it and gives it a nice finish. When my siblings come in they make a lot of noise so they get sent to their own room. Although those are all of my creative accessories now. It is a very modern bedroom, with a tropical theme. It may be the view of the mountain you see out my window or maybe the blue colour scheme or maybe even all the photographs on my crisp white walls. There are plenty of possible metaphors for home. the final theme is football simply because we love football and there is football stuff everywhere that we play with in the house. It has creamy vanilla wallpaper with 2 rose red chandeliers that hang of the corners of my room. A lumpy duvet lies messily on the thick mattress that cradles me at night. Also two comfy blue headphones and it's sound is great as well I have had this for a few months now. you could add some more descriptive words, Angus your punctuation was good but your spelling had a couple of 'i's in stead of a I. In my bedroom I have a big abstract photo of mountains hanging above my head. My carpet is dark brown and I have no rugs or anything other than my carpet on the floor. It also has jumps for my motorbike but you cant really see them because they are covered over with grass since I dont go on them much anymore. Maybe because it has two duvets on it and the sun is shining on it. Sophies Bedroom They are happy to enjoy the predictable lives they have, rather than search for an exciting purpose in their existence. On the wall where my bed is place there is my name, the letters carved in wood and painted in pink with many forms of glitter, sequins and charms all stuck to them. My bed is on the other side of the room behind the door, and my bedside table with my draws with my dvd player and some clothes. Describes it well. And make sense of your sentences. We usually waste power by turning on the lights just so we can see properly. I did the wrong thing. Sometimes when it's really cold i'll have my soft red blanket as well. My desk is probably the messiest part of my room because of the way that all my notebooks, pens, pencils and pencil cases are sprawled on it. R4. You could work on the adjectives but otherwise very good. You could have added some more descriptive words in there. No need to be fancy, just an overview. On the other side a white storage couch with a picnic basket design, inside are teddy bears that had been given to me over the years and have sentimental value. I like how you used brackets and capital letters to make words stand out, Your Spelling is good Molly. The accessories are the things I think help make my room unique. I like it because it has all my precious stuff. So, you could imagine someone who has just put lights all over their house standing back, looking at it, and remarking: my home is now a Christmas tree!, Another time you might use this is if you drive up your driveway to your home and see that all the lights are on inside. My accessories, however arent as basic as my furniture, but rather the opposite. The lampshade sits on my bedside table along side my phone, phone charger, a clock, a cold water bottle and random pieces of paper. There is a massive window in front of you as you walk into my bedroom. We have a small sister that isnt allowed in but she comes in anyway. Its a blue 3 person couch with blue, red, and green lines all [around the couch and it unfolds into a king size bed when unfolded. Its there to hold previous achievements and precious keepsakes but I really just use it to hold some certificates that cant find in my bookshelf. My favorite thing in my bedroom is my drums they are blue and black but look purple in the light. But one thing that you could work on with your punctuation is how much you used. Look at the picture and make sentences to describe the bedroom. When you walk into my bedroom you will see three different colours starting at the entrance and going all the way through the room. Above my bed are decorations and then across from my bed there is my creamy white set of draws. Overall I give you a 4. In the middle of my room up against the feature wall is my bed, its a Queen Double, with white outlines of hexagons and a grey background for my duvet and pillows. But there are some things that I would really like to change like my bed would be better if it was double size and maybe a little bit of colour on my walls would make it much better. Flick Of The Wrist Meaning, Your email address will not be published. The theme of my bedroom is black, white, blue and grey. I have a double bed,white covers and matching pillows to my starry bed which is navy blue and white spots sprinkled all over It. When in my room, its as though you are separated from the rest of the house, because it is much more colourful and decorative. Its lovely to see the colour of your carpet again, Just a wee reminder please unpack your rugby bag before it starts waffling out the door!! Then a little bit more right you will see a king size bed with a star wars duvay cover and black pillows. I love my room with all of these mashed up colours. This means I get most of the afternoon sun. My bedroom, is a wonderful room to hangout in. The color of my wardrobe connected to my wall is black I would probably want to change the color to the same as the wall. Creamy brown and soft those are just few words I would use to describe my carpet it is great for my hard feet. The cloths on the large draws with the big mirror really need to be tidied up and put away properly then there is the pile of bags that have my ski gear and cricket bag the big bags could deffently be tidyed up and put in the garag. This is placed in the left hand corner underneath my window. But sometimes it doesn't stay clean. By Angus Stewart, I like how you have clearly stated your paragraphs. Ray Davies Natalie Ray Hynde, I like the way you've used a lot of punctuation in your writing with full stops used correctly, spacing after a comma and capital letters after full stops. My bed is really messy, it would be rare to see it made. I am happy that I have a couch in my room it helps my back I dont know how but it does, sometimes it's easy to fall asleep on it after a long day of work. Muesli bar wrappers, food wrappers and clothes tags are a common item found on my floor. Sometimes a little bit of exaggeration creates the best metaphors. Other than using my bedroom for sleeping I use it for quiet time, keeping up with what's on social media and sometimes doing my homework. My wall color is a nice light sea blue color I wouldn't change anything about it. The color of the carpet is a dark grey which goes with the furniture and the color of the walls. It was a good description of your room I rely could visualized what the room looked like. These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. It's like a prison for books and random junk, and you never see it again until you decide to move your room around, which for me is usually every 3 years or so. -3, Brody, I like your writing. Due to the architectural design of my house, my rooms windows receive little to no sun, excluding the few hours of late afternoon to sundown. The dark side. I have a globe lamp on top of my chest of drawers but the bulb in it broke so its all taken apart, sitting next to it is my 3D colosseum puzzle. Well Done Jakey Muss x. KADENS BEDROOM Accessories is definitely one of my favorite things to see in my room. Your capital letters are really good. I have the white bedside table right next to my bed because well i need something to put my drink on, and I think that's the same for my sister. I enjoyed reading your writing illustrates without hesitation what your room feels and looks like. Next time your could probably add some more descriptive words, not saying that there was not any but just add some more in like more bigger descriptive words. My room has a very light colour theme, these colours include snowy white, shades of my favourite colour blue and hints of midnight black. It gives a very accurate picture of Sophie's room. I like the part when you recognise that your room needs cleaning and organise your things to feel much comfortable but most of all you are comfortable in your room. I would like my room to be neater and tidyer so my mother would not be nagging at me all the time saying pick up your clothes Bree or make your bed Bree. Firstly the layout, my bedroom is the largest bedroom in the house and this means I have to share it with my younger sister. Underneath by clip board I have small shapes of watermelon bunting. The bedside table is filled with tangled plugs, wires and even a pringles can. e.g, the size of your bed, and the colours of your bed covers. This final piece of text will be explaining the lighting. But there is always room for throwing down pillows as a carpet you will never know unless you try. Your descriptive writing has a 'quirky' sense of humour in it showing good 'personal voice'. Finally is my headset it is a turtlebeach recon 60P with a black base and a cool funky design on the base. I adore my paintings and the way that they match my theme of turquoise blue. Chargers, Polaroid, medals and cards are a big part of my accessories. Idioms and Metaphors about Having a Good Sleep 8. Brothers Of A Feather Driving Wheel Lyrics. I love my room just the way it is, I even love the modern color's. Then you notice the two untidy desks slightly to the right of my dresser. My wardrobe the mirror is all dusty with had prints all over it and inside it has rubbish, all my rugby gear, ski gear and more clothes. On one side of the room has a bunk bed where the bottom bunk is a double and the top is a single. But they aren't dirty they are actually quite clean all thanks to my dog. The rest of the walls are a nice white color and it goes with the furniture that is against it. My mini drawers has three drawers on top of each other with the middle one being slightly longer than the others. If you were to walk into my room you would see it is very bright. I have a couple of lamps hidden around the room so when its dark it makes this cool effect. I like how you used a lot of description! I wonder what you would change about it if you had the chance too? You needed to double check your punctuation and spelling as there are quite a few mistakes when it comes to these areas. 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